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Storytelling Starters ~ Poems can be stories too

My husband has been singing Scottish folk-songs. Two friends from New Zealand have just been on holiday to Scotland’s West Coast and loved it. Their trip included Oban, which is where one of my grandfathers came from. And yesterday talking with my Scottish storyteller friend, Jean Edmiston (she sent a lovely comment on last week’s blog), we talked a lot about the sense of place and how powerful it is when you’re storytelling.

A poem from Arisaig:

P1010525It must have been all those Scottish connections that made me remember a poem I once came across. It was hanging on the wall of a pub or café (I can’t remember which) in Arisaig one time we were up on that same West Coast. I wrote it down and afterwards I told the story of it and read it out to classes of children on a number of storytelling occasions. Once with an especially responsive class of ten-year-olds, we somehow got the idea of doing the poem with sound effects. I remember auditioning volunteers for all the many different sounds in the poem – the gulls, the whimper, the grey dog running. Then we performed it, me reading the words, them doing the sounds. They were wonderful. It still brings a thrill to my spine to recall it.

So this week, I’m quoting the poem in full because it’s one of the most haunting poems I’ve ever come across and so evocative of a sense of place. Also it affirms the truth that stories come in many forms, including in poems. But first let me expain the background to it’s story. According to a note that accompanied the poem where it hung on that wall in Arisaig,  it so happened that at the time of the Highland Clearances at Rhu Arisaig – and the Highland Clearances were where crofters were cleared off the land by land-owners – one of the families that were evacuated by boat accidentally left behind a favourite collie. Afterwards,  it was often said locally that, at dusk on certain evenings,  the ‘grey ghost’ searches the shore. 

The Grey Dog of Rhu Arisaig – by Roy Ferguson

From the little stone pier at Rhu, when dusk is falling, walk southward on the shore road. The scent of tangle comes floating in from the islands on the sea-wind.
Gulls clamour in the bay as they plunder and harvest small-fry, shaking silver from their wing-tips at the night fishing.
From the rocks below, brown sea-duck put out in bobbing rafts.
On a point of land a heron stands with immeasurable patience, pale eyes revolving, cataloguing all movement.

When the islands fade in the dark grip of night, look about you.
Watch and listen.
On the road just above the ruined croft a shadow flits past – you may hear the whimper of loneliness.

The grey dog is running.
He searches alone. He scents for the peat reek, he whines for the rough hand on his coat and the voice that commands. 
He will crouch in the dark heather, sniff and prick his ears.
His patience is long.
Did he not run the flock on the hill in panting-hot summer, or with the bitter storm off the winter sea and hail in his eyes?

He will run on. On till moonrise.
On till the rocky headlands stand like black strongholds and the bays hold silver mirrors to the shore.
Night will pass and moonset, and at dawn he will herd his flock in the high hills where mists dew the rowan and waterfalls speak softly to one another.

Unseen, he crouches awaiting the high sharp whistle, the far voice and the brittle outline of dusk.
Along the shore road the grey dog is running to his vigil.

PS: Just one picture this week – the poem is so full of strong images, I couldn’t bear to interrupt them. So all you’ve got is the single piece of seaweed at the top. But here’s a question to go with it. Does anyone else use poems as part of their storytelling? It could be a very rich theme.

PPS:

I’ve been trying to find out about Roy Ferguson, the author of The Grey Dog of Rhu Arisaig but I haven’t got anywhere yet.

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8 Responses to “Storytelling Starters ~ Poems can be stories too”

  1. Jean Says:

    Oh Mary – heartbreaking, beautiful and I could almost smell the seaweed and hear those gulls – I shall read that on Tues to a group of older people that I work with. Haunting poems are a favourite with these groups in care homes – and i do read poems frequently.
    ‘The Way Thru the Woods’ by Rudyard Kipling, and ‘The Listeners’ by Walter de la Mare are 2 favourites.
    Thanks again for the blog – I always look forward to the Saturday storytelling inspirations.
    Thank you Jeanxx

  2. Mary Medlicott Says:

    Dear Jean

    I’m obviously very behindhand with replying to comments. Blame it on the summer. Anyway, this is just to say I’m glad you love poems too. All the best, Mary

  3. Liz Richards Says:

    Loved the poem, it made me feel sad and stayed in my thoughts a long time afterwards. Would make an amazing short story Thanks LIz xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  4. Mary Medlicott Says:

    Dear Liz, better late than never. This very late reply to your posting about the ghost dog poem is just to say how glad I am you liked it. Yes, I find it immensely sad too. All the best, Mary

  5. Meg Says:

    Made me cry and wonder why I identify so strongly with dogs, especially sheep dogs. They can be such intuitive, hard-working, faithful creatures and stories of their bond with their shepherds always move me.
    Love the way potential stories catch our attention as we go about our everyday. I used to recite a ghostly poem from a picture book called “Tog the Ribber” full of nonsense words and atmosphere, like “the Jabberwocky.”
    Thanks again, Mary.

  6. Mary Medlicott Says:

    Dear Meg, this is a very belated reply to your message about the poem on the ghost dog of Arisaig.I’m so glad it touched your heart as it did mine. Amazingly, a short time ago (and since publishing that posting), I’ve seen one of the people who were with me in Arisaig when I sa that poem. They’ve just been back there and the poem is still up on the wall. Strange synchronicity,hey? All best wishes, Mary

  7. Graham Cook Says:

    I’m just back from my annual trip to Arisaig. Each year we visit the Arisaig Hotel where I’m always drawn to the Grey Dog Story framed on the wall. It always makes me sad. When I’m on the old Rhu road I always will the Grey Dog to make an appearance. The Highland Clearances must have been sad, sad times.

  8. Mary Medlicott Says:

    Good to hear from someone else who is haunted by that Grey Dog. I don’t make an annual trip to Arisaig but I often think of the story. My Scottish grandfather took shorthand records of the work of the Highland Clearances Commission on the isles of Seal and Ling. Yes, they must have been sad, sad times.

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